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Re: And now I just sit in silence
The emotions flow out of this poem, I found it very well written. The feelings you put into the poem show, at some times too much but still very good! ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 11:56 pm -
Re: Textbooks and Fairytales
Brilliant! I love every line! Especially the line when you say "treat us like kids, expect us to act like adults" most adults in general do that to kids and ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 11:05 pm -
Re: Mouth Open
I love this! You added such realism to the poem I almost died. The emotion is there and the topics is interesting. Well other than that I have nothing to ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 11:01 pm -
Re: Haste
I know this wasn't supposed to be posted but I still really liked it! Since I know this isn't of she'd I won't rip on you for leaving me hanging! ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 10:58 pm -
Re: What Lies Beyond the Wall
Okay let me start off by saying that I love post-apocalyptic stories! And I am a HUGE science fiction geek! I loved this and I was hooked! The only problem ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 10:54 pm -
Re: A Short Ode to Here
Wow this is a great poem! I can see this on the spotlight one day! I loved the way you ended it with the whole dirt bit! I found it ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 10:49 pm -
Re: Blood and Silver Ch. Seven
Hello fellow team mate! Thought I would give you a review since you seem to be in the green room this fine evening. Okay first I would like to say ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 10:46 pm -
Re: Nichole Olafson Attended The highly prestigious, Madison Area Memorial High School
Hello cherry here to: A)'make sure that stupid blue team doesn't win B) review your amazing piece of work! This was very short. Sweet, simple and yet very interesting. I ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 10:39 pm -
Re: House of Whispers: Chapter 6 - Of Forest and Memory
Wow you ended this in the feels. Is it weird that I am afraid to go pee now? Okay I would like to say that the creepy way of ending ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:55 pm -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 45-46 (Revised)
Okay can they please just get married? Like really, what are we waiting for... Okay hello, sorry it took me 74 chapters to review this but now or never! I ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:47 pm -
Re: Freedom
Okay I am just wondering how is this not on the spotlight! You truly have a wonderful gift for poetry and I am happy to have you as a fellow ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:33 pm -
Re: Of Fights and Letters: Chapter 3: Flirting and Infirmaries
I really love this chapter. The comical parts, when you chose to put them were right at the correct pace. My favorite part is: I already got into two fights. ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:20 pm -
Re: Silence
Silence was an interesting poem to write about! I love how much energy you put I to the tone of this poem. The words from my screen cam alive and ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:52 am -
Re: the same poem since january
This was just really pretty! I liked the way you did everything! My favorite part has to be: in the half empty room. This brings the poem to life and ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:56 am -
Re: The Sweet Smell of Dead Babies
I actually really liked this! I am usually not a big fan of werewolves or anything with the description of: nom nom nom nom but for this it just grabbed ...
Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:52 am
