Young Writers Society

Hi there, I'm Chelle! I have to be honest with you here. While this has the potential to be absolutely amazing, it's kind of boring right now. There is so ...

Hey there, I'm Chelle! This is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this prologue, but there's just a few minor things that caught my eye(I'll try not to repeat the ones ...

She's too trusting. It's one big thing that irks me with this novel. She doesn't question, she doesn't put up any kind of a fight. I know she is supposed ...

This is a really interesting story so far! I like how by the end of the chapter, the reader still doesn't really understand what is going on/what this mind collaborator ...

Oh goodness, this is so sad! I definately think it started out a bit boring and got way better at the end. I did notice a few small grammatical errors, ...

When I first started reading this, I couldn't decide whether or not I liked it. By the time I finished, I realized I did. I do think you could make ...

I think this was done beautifully! I don't know anyone who is transgender, so I also don't know at all what it feels like to think this about yourself, but ...

This needs way more feeling. I feel like it was written in boredom, with not enough understanding of such a sensitive issue. Self mutilation affects millions of people, every single ...

This is a very interesting piece of work. I really like the idea you have. The people above me have mentioned most of what I was thinking of saying anyways, ...

Hello! Great plot so far, it's very intriguing and makes the reader want to read more. I love the way you write, the way you use your words. Please, please, ...

I'm going to start by saying I'm right crap at reviews, which is why I never give them haha. But I'm bored and this one caught my eye. I really ...

I'm going to be a bit vague here, and not very technical since I don't know enough about poetry to do so. First off, I think it's a very cute ...

Hello! So, to start this off I am terrible at writing and critiquing poetry, but I'm going to give it a go. As some people above said that they didn't ...

Beautifully written. I love the first stanza. The entire poem is extremely thoughtful and makes the reader think. About life, and truth, and whether or not life will move on ...