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Re: A Candy Seller's Misfortune.
This was a good, heartfelt story!! I enjoyed it, however just one spelling mishap I saw. In the beginning, the one nothing does not need to be capitalized. The second ...
Dec 28, 2019 -
Re: hallways. Chapter 1.
I see where you are going with this, and I would try and go more into the black shadow. That in my opinion would creep me the heck out. Secondly, ...
Dec 21, 2019 -
Re: Chapter one of Calli's Dilemma
oh wow, I did not know that.
Dec 21, 2019 -
Re: By his side (CHRISTmas poem)
christmasy!
Dec 19, 2019 -
Re: Chapter one of Calli's Dilemma
I enjoyed this, it makes me want to know more. The ending really grasps at the reader wanting to continue. I liked how you described life as a teenager!
Dec 18, 2019 -
Re: Apollo 18- The Secret Mission
thank you!
Dec 18, 2019 -
Re: To the monster under my bed
wow great work!
Dec 18, 2019