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  • Poetry » Other, Horror Re: The Devils Right Outside

    Hey, jasper! This poem is wow. Usually, I am a heavy sucker for romance but this was astonishing. Glad I checked out this work of art. First, the structure is ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Seafoamy

    Hello, Pretzel Firstly, let me just say wow. I'm an avid poetry writer and this piece was just beautiful. I always tend to start with structure and the structure you ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Best Thing Ever

    Hello, fangirl! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and I will explain why. Firstly, the caps really caught my attention. I wasn't quite sure how I felt about such, but it's ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: A Different Tomorrow

    Hello, cpedro! I have stumbled across your poem and boy am I glad I did. First, I'm going to start with your structure. I love poems with a nice structure ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Other » Romantic, Romantic Re: Beautiful.

    Hey Cuddly! I love this piece being the hopeless romantic I am. The description of a person specifying who it is without actually doing so creates an enigmatic feeling leading ...

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Full-Meaning on the Sides of a Stage

    Hello Holographic, This piece is just beautiful. The use of the imagery and wide spread diction placed intricately really creates a flow without unnecessary repetition, which as a reader I ...

    Jan 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Twinkle Twinkle.

    Hey TheShauzer! This poem is short and sweet while painting the emotion beautifully. Your vocabulary sets the tone very nicely with subtle points of repetition. I don't believe there is ...

    Jan 28, 2016


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