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Re: The Devils Right Outside
Hey, jasper! This poem is wow. Usually, I am a heavy sucker for romance but this was astonishing. Glad I checked out this work of art. First, the structure is ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Seafoamy
Hello, Pretzel Firstly, let me just say wow. I'm an avid poetry writer and this piece was just beautiful. I always tend to start with structure and the structure you ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: The Best Thing Ever
Hello, fangirl! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and I will explain why. Firstly, the caps really caught my attention. I wasn't quite sure how I felt about such, but it's ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: A Different Tomorrow
Hello, cpedro! I have stumbled across your poem and boy am I glad I did. First, I'm going to start with your structure. I love poems with a nice structure ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: Beautiful.
Hey Cuddly! I love this piece being the hopeless romantic I am. The description of a person specifying who it is without actually doing so creates an enigmatic feeling leading ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Full-Meaning on the Sides of a Stage
Hello Holographic, This piece is just beautiful. The use of the imagery and wide spread diction placed intricately really creates a flow without unnecessary repetition, which as a reader I ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Twinkle Twinkle.
Hey TheShauzer! This poem is short and sweet while painting the emotion beautifully. Your vocabulary sets the tone very nicely with subtle points of repetition. I don't believe there is ...
Jan 28, 2016
