chasingcolts21

Hello. :D Now, starting with the title. Be careful, there's also a song with the same name. The stanzas are kind of unbalanced, I'd make each the same amount of ...

Hello, my name is Colt. Overall, I was awed. The description was lively and amazing. It was better than the title made it out to be. I would change the ...

Hello! I'm Colt, a newer member myself! Welcome to YWS! I see you are new, but we have a rule here saying you cannot post your work without reviewing two ...

Hello, I'm Colt, and I liked your poems, they are creative and spicy! I stand beside a mountain The stream beside me pure. The forests all around me Silent as ...

Wow, the first verse seems way too long to me! Try shortens it or breaking it into two verses instead. The first verse could use more punctuation. God was very ...

Hello, my name is Colt. I really liked this song. It reminded me of the Little Mermaid. Hehe. There was a lot of alliteration and repetition, good job on that. ...

Hello, I'm Colt... First thing I want to say is be careful with the beginning. I wouldn't dare phrase my opening line like yours, I don't like 'this is a....about...." ...

This was an okay poem. Parts were good and others were...just there. But that's what we are for--to fix them! If you actually do end up getting this published, I ...

Hello, I'm Colt. 1. I have a knack for noticing formatting problems in work. Is there a reason the title is not centered, but the actual poem is? 2. TOO ...

Welcome to YWS, once again. I'm Colt. I'm kind of new too, so yay us! I don't know if it was meant, but the first verse kind of stands out ...

Hello, my name is Colt. First of all, the format is totally wrong! I have never seen a poem written on one line like that before. It's called pressing the ...

Hello, my name is Colt, and I'll be reviewing your work this evening. I must say, this is a creative, outside-the-box idea. I hope you build on to it. Yay ...

June. You need to post something new, so I can go grammar picky. Hehe. :P The title was amazing, it stuck out and I love it. I can see it ...

Hello June! :) I am editing this because I told you I would :P Nice piece, it's really short and sweet. Title: Maybe something simple as Truth, Wisdom, or Words. ...

Hello! Like Rory said, it was great to read a "smart" piece of writing. Nice little footnote. This is the first piece I have seen here with one. Bravo! I ...