champ321

Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. First thing I noticed was the way you set up the stanzas. It almost looks like a person. I really like that. I like ...

I'm not gonna really touch on too much grammar. I could understand what you wanted to get across. I really like the way he was in the forest and the ...

Really cool short story ya got here. I really enjoyed the imagery and your choice of words and verbs. The message of the devil and the strong will of the ...

You will be something great in your time. I loved every single word of this piece. I was almost in tears by the end. I really and truly admire you ...

Wow man, you are something else. Not only to you have this natural ability of conveying your thoughts, emotions, and images of your minds eye to paper, you have this ...

Wow, really cool take on the suicidal urge you called the darkness. I was half expecting the man to be consumed in flames. Or turn into an alter ego and ...

Interesting short story, kind of choppy, and a bit confusing. But like always, the steady pace of your style and your excellent use of imagery does well to keep the ...

I automatically fell in love the main character of your story. Any story surrounding the lives of two hot Latina twins, and I am in. I would have like to ...

I was hoping you take the time to really draw out a long and richly detailed chapter, but hell, that can only start with words. I like the many ideas ...

Hey man, This story is so entertaining, you have a natural talent for literal comedy, and the way your character views the world is very relatable, I think. I see ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It gave me an Assassin's Creed feel: play par core on rooftops, freeing fellow assassins and thieves from medieval dungeons, taunting the kings guard. It ...

Hey, I just have to say you are an excellent writer. The vocabulary and some of the metaphors you use are so rich and always so diverse. You repeat some ...

Hey there, What an excellent story! It's very sad. It makes me think of the lead singer from Everlast. He wrote a song called 56 Roses for his young daughter ...

Wow kid, at thirteen, and you're writing like this, I just see an illustrious career in your future. Tunneling through mountains, tearing them down if you have to, but you ...

You set a really great tone here, although I did not see the beginning of a novel or any particular chapter. I only noticed the inner turmoil of young boy ...