chamberlainj

First off don't apologise for what you have written, you gave it a rating which is all you need to do, trust me, we have seen much darker topics covered ...

Well you see to miss the point here, there is a reason for lack of detail and alot of other things. The point is not about how he would feel ...

Hey there. I read your poem. Want to hear what I think?? :-) Your rhyme was very forced and your rhythm was kind of . . . well, not there. ...

“Chill the fuck out” says Ellina ridiculously “You almost hit me.” I just pulled this line out. You need a comma after out and also you need a comma after ...

Great poems espacially the second one. It was funny but I didn't fined any cursing in your poem. Good Job! Thank you very much thats just the kind of feeling ...

Ummm.....I think you made a mistake. You aren't suppose to use cursing language unless it's in the post not the comment....you might want to edit that:D I can't follow what ...

P.S. That random bored one could be classified as stupid by some, but who says that's bad? I like it! This where i stood on my poem I looked at ...

I started to read one of these one time when i was probably in 4th grade. And i lost the book and could not think of what the series was ...

Hahaha that was a really nice fun poem to read I liked it keep up the work.

Holy crap that was intense, that was absolutely incredible. Can't say it any other way can't sit here and write a huge lesson on it. Just speechless mind blowing everything ...