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There's a bunch of misspelled words, Careful! Commas and description are needed. I like the idea, but you need to make it more interesting, or the reader, well, won't be ...

Is it like a cold, uncaring persom, who would do anything to anyone? Interesting...

Does it symbolize war? Like, the soldiers always watching over and making fun of the people? I like it.

I really like it. It is an awesome way to explain how you feel about life. Or just a good poem, if that's all it is. Well, I think it's ...

Interesting. I would like more detail, though. Very, very non-descriptive.

I think its very well written, I prefer free verse, though.