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Re: Warm Summer Feeling
HELLO!! warm summer feeling is such a fitting title 4 this piece - it genuinely does carry that quality, like something bright and slightly dizzy. the moment that got me ...
Mar 21 -
Re: 03.13.26 - saturate
hello!! really tender work, this. the title, as it is, stands out - saturate as a verb, a goal, an aspiration, positioned against a poem that's mostly about its opposite. ...
Mar 17 -
Re: dilapidation (slack-jawed & inescapable)
hello!! this is a really impressive piece of work, and i mean that with full sincerity! the first thing worth saying is that sustaining an extended metaphor across an entire ...
Mar 16 -
Re: it is like that time Frank O'Hara wrote the line 'I am the least difficult of men'
oh, this is lovely. pulling 'I am the least difficult of men' as your anchor is such a smart and tender choice because that line is almost always read as ...
Mar 16 -
Re: Houseflies
HEllo!! this is such an interestingly radical work and i mean that in the best way! i particularly enjoy the way the poem rehabilitates something we instinctively dismiss, because there's ...
Mar 16 -
Re: The Devadasi’s Eavesdropper
this is an absolutely beautiful piece, and you carry it so assuredly! the cultural specificity alone is so lovingly done, with the Mridangam, the abhinaya, the sakhi, the solfège breaks. ...
Mar 16 -
Re: Corpus coloseum (ft a bonus poem)
hello!! a little review here, i found this an interesting piece to sit with! the opener's doing something really clever and i want to start there, because grounding a philosophical ...
Mar 14 -
Re: lovely conversations
hello!! i think this is a really lovely piece, and there's a genuine warmth to it that i notice feels lived-in rather than performed, like it came from a real ...
Mar 14
