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This was so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the last sentencce!!!! please make another post continuing the story!! Maybe we could collaborate on it or something!! I know you wanted a review, ...

ok, i am going to analyze this paragraph by paragraph. #1) what does this mean? " When you love someone hurt you." ? also, when you wrote "the first poem ...

for me, this was a very uplifting poem! so great job with that! I had a couple questions though that could be improvements. when you said: "Is this how it ...

this was an amazing poem, although, i didn't understand some of it. For example, you rhymed, the didn't, then you did again. What was the point of that? I liked ...

OK, so there are a lot of things you could improve on here. 1) you used italics A LOT!!! i get in the last paragraph when you were having somebody ...

This was a great story!! I'll bet if you expanded this, it would sell amazingly!! I might even buy it!! I don't really have any critiques, but i have one ...

LIke you said, i didn't read all of it.. but from what i read, it was good. YEs, there are some imporvements, but i think it all starts with the ...

First off, THIS WAS AMAZING!! I felt like i really understood it, even though i can't relate. So, excellent job to you. You said you wanted a mix of feedback, ...