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Re: Dark stories to read whenever and wherever
-Cleo Carson speaking *Spooky Scary Skeletons intensifies* Everything is properly formatted from what I could see. Also story 4 is the exact crap I'd get myself into. Really enjoyable, lots ...
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Re: The Tail of Timothy and Other YWS Shenanigans
-C. Carson speaking I didn't make it 10 lines before I died of laughter. XD GOOD THINGS: Made me laugh. It is well structured, well written, and absolutely hilarious. This ...
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Re: Unfinished Business
-C. Carson speaking GOOD THINGS: I like how you give the option to change character genders, depending on the reader's preference. I like the general concept of someone giving therapy ...
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Re: This Is Not A Love Story
-C. Carson speaking GOOD THINGS: One major plus is the use of proper terms like EXT.(exterior). This story is easy to follow in my opinion, and somewhat entertaining. BAD THINGS: ...
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Re: Celestria’s story
-C. Carson speaking GOOD THINGS: Nice! This is easy to read and describes exactly what happens. It almost reads like a poem. BAD THINGS: Near the end, the story starts ...
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Re: Top 10 Weird Things in My Life Right Now | A Short Story in Epistolary Form
-C. Carson speaking Oh no! Not the instant noodles! I need those! XD GOOD THINGS: Anyways... Fighting monsters? Yes, count me in! Spells that burn things? Absolutely! I also agree, ...
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Re: Wonderful
---Cleo Speaking Very nice! I like how you properly formatted the dialogue! Most writers don't realize that every time a different character speaks, it's a new paragraph in the story. ...
Dec 2, 2022