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That was really helpful, thanks! cbwriterchick

I loved that. The whole aspect of filling a notebook is something I can really relate to, so i really liked it. keep writing!

ok, this was amazing. I love the first line, about the glow of the cigarretes. the part about him playing his guitar without looking at the strings was perfect, and ...

Ok, coming from the point of view of a thirteen year old girl, wow. I can completely see where you're coming from. I have had a few boy problems myself ...

I like how you did the emotions with 'breaking up' with your friend, i think it is something that most teenage girls can relate to. Also, I loved the vocabulary ...