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Re: Oath Of Silence
I'm not quite sure how to respond to this poem. I can sense there is some meaning to this poem, I just can tell what. And the poem is called ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Her Mind's Winter
Chilling. It sends chills down my spine. I like how there are parts parts in italics to symbolize her thoughts. While it is true that some parts are unclear and ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Echo
This piece makes me feel immensely happy for some reason! Just the feeling that comes from it. The imagery used is vivid. A dance themed title would probably suit it ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Suffers Of A Young Woman
I like the poem, and although I am slightly confused I understand the meaning pretty well. The way you write is blunt and sort of choppy, but I think it ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Do You Know Me?
I don't know you. The poem may be too personal, depending on what you consider too personal. I like the poem. The feelings in just grab you and take you ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Where Is My Mind?
Oh dear, I hope you find your mind! But even without it you have written a fantastic poem! I find the topic of this poem extremely interesting and the way ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: I Did It For Them
I like the rhyme and the flow, and how it tells a story. The problem is, I'm not sure what the story is. So unless confusion is the emotion you ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Big Illusion of Happiness
That's a great poem! The way it tells a story is fantastic and it flows very well. I didn't see any spelling errors, but I'm not the best at spelling. ...
Jul 10, 2011
