catherinem527

I can't tell you how much I appreciate you doing this! Thank you for being so complementative - and I will get on the grammar :) There's a lot that ...

I'm reviewing this later - sounds really good, im hooked but i dont have time to read

Thank you! And I would've never noticed those things, thanks for pointing them out!

Thank you so much! And about the nitpicky things, I have to add accents to those words, so that's why they aren't capitalized. Should've mentioned that haha

Thank you so much! And about the nitpicky things, I have to add accents to those words, so that's why they aren't capitalized. Should've mentioned that haha

Thank you so much! And about the nitpicky things, I have to add accents to those words, so that's why they aren't capitalized. Should've mentioned that haha

Thank you so much! And about the nitpicky things, I have to add accents to those words, so that's why they aren't capitalized. Should've mentioned that haha

Thank you so much! And about the nitpicky things, I have to add accents to those words, so that's why they aren't capitalized. Should've mentioned that haha

Meh. We all have those haha

Wow - that's a great hook. Try to steer away from the cliche, but a little is inevitable :) . I would definetly like to keep reading this. Keep posting!

Thank you SO much!!! I really appreciate your super long comment, it realy means a lot, considering what i usually get is "oh thats really good." I agree with what ...

Thank you so much! I will definetlly fix those things.

Hi. This is really good! Definetly a hook! So, I like the concept, and I feel like you could really go somewhere with this. Just try to steer away from ...

I LOVE this! Just not the last two lines. I feel like the maturity of the first stanza completly juxtaposes the last part, and not in a good way.