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This is great! The flow of this piece is so smooth and easy to follow. I love everything about it! :D Good job, except I think the only one flaw ...

Um, I think it's too late for me to provie feedback for you now (since you probably already handed this story in) but I just wanted to comment on it ...

Wow! This is AMAZING! :D I didn't really pick up any major errors and the mood created from this piece of writing is so amazing! It kept me captivated all ...

Hi, this was a good poem, it just had a little too much repetition and could've been more creative but otherwise, it was really well done. In the poem you ...

Great poem! :D I agree with Stargirl101 on her review, but I'll add a few points of my own. The first stanza, I must admit, is a little confusing. The ...

Hey! This was incredible! It's so short yet so effective. I entirely agree with MeganKat on her review, but just wanted to add a few things myself. First of all, ...

Hey this was great! A few mistakes here and there and maybe some things that I would've changed a little if I'd written this myself...but besides that, I think it ...

Hey, first thing: this is a great poem! It was short and simple but very effective and interesting to read as well. I must admit that it held quite a ...

Hi! This is an awesome story! Very emotional and I guess that's just one of the many things I loved about it. Overall, I'd like to say great effort! A ...

Hey, great story! It was really entertaining and interesting. I agree with Kae and think that you did pretty well for third-person. But I'll be honest here and admit the ...

Hey, great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and loved every part of it! But I'll be honest and say that I didn't quite understand the last bit. What exactly ...

That was SO good! Seriously had me transfixed until the end! Awesome storyline and the twists were really unexpected which, I guess, is what made it so fun to read. ...

Hey I REALLY liked this story! I even copy pasted the link for it to a friend of mine who also liked it very much! Great job Meshugenah! Truly had ...