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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: As The World Falls

    Wow!Love this poem. It flows really well and I think this reflects how we think the world is will be OK. The contrast between good and bad such a the ...

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: Frozen in Time

    I really like this poem! It has a nostalgic tone and I can relate to this special moment. You keep it quite light hearted but with a touch raw emotion ...

    Nov 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Dyslexia

    Really liked this poem! I liked the rhyming of the second and fourth line and the fact that it wasn't in every verse. In the verses that had no rhyming ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Sight

    So, I love this poem! I like the fact that the first and second stanza reflect your problems and flaws but with your special someone fixing you and then the ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Way

    Really enjoyable to read. It flows really well. I loved that I could find multiple meanings in the poem. I also adored the inspirational touch that was laced with advice. ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom vs safety

    Written quite well! Really like this outlook on life. I do think you should tone back the punctuation (the commas and full stops) if you want a better flow. If ...

    May 16, 2014


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