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Most people can complain about awkward moments where they found themselves uncomfortably close to someone’s face for the first time. The trend is often the earlier one can get their ...

There were a lot of errors, most of which got pointed out, but those are easily fixed. However, it really seems like there is absolutely no point to this. While ...

Midnight and all was quiet, go figure the one night I decided to volunter for my partner Jax and nothing of importance was going on. (Volunter should be volunteer. This ...

This actually caught my attention perfectly, I was incredibly interested. I think I was worth more than that. This should possibly be either "I think I am," or (and probably ...

To use a favorite phrase of English teachers and Grammar Nazis; "Show, don't tell." Choppy, not very descriptive, and nothing much is actually happening. Dialog can be key, but you ...

Suzanna smoothed her long blonde hair back into its proper position and stared into her own dark hazel eyes. But yet she hated being so pretty. All of the county's ...

A lot of shaky sentence structure, several grammar/punctuation errors, and several places where it's just plain choppy. I think most of it has been pointed out. You don't get a ...