casey_kent

I liked it a lot. I can see the passion and the fire burning in you. It's a beautiful poem just as it is. And what made it even more ...

I thought this poem was cute. Lot's of humor and good rhyming. The only thing you have to work on it capitalization and punctuation. Please don't forget that as a ...

Since they've critiqued everything, I'll just tell you about my views on the poem. I think that it was nice. I liked it. My favorite stanzas are the last two ...

Aww. I really like this poem. Reminds me of my mom. If you'd put some melody to this, and my own dear mother would sing it for me, I would ...

Hello there Alberto!! Welcome to YWS!! Okay, first things first, we have a rule which indicates that you have to make 2 reviews first before posting any of your work. ...

Oh-kay. First of all, you should read the rules and FAQs before anything else. You already broke a rule. You cannot post a piece unless you have already made 2 ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! You're from the Philippines? Wow. Me too.. Okay down with the critique.. Since mizz-iceberg broke it down, lemme just say, it's a bit confusing. The ...

I liked it. I love M&M's! Wee! I went to the salon yesterday and got my nails painted like M&M's. Red, blue, orange, green and yellow. Diff colors on my ...

I love your poem. Dreams. Aaah. Good feeling. When people tell me to stop dreaming because I know it's impossible anyway, I ignore them and tell them that there's absolutely ...

Hey there! I liked your poem. What's inside is true. Very true in fact. I like people who writes the truth. And you are one of them. Yay! And you ...

Welcome to YWS! I think this poem is pretty good. Although you have to cut up everything into stanzas so it won't look like a big chunk of boring words. ...

I liked it. It was kind of emotional that it may want people to cry. There's just something in it. Like a tinge of spark that makes it really interesting ...

Wow. I loved this poem. It's so... uhh... loss of words sorry. I'm a fan of yours already. You are so my favorite poet. lol. This poem is amazing, beautiful. ...

Aww. I liked it. It reminded me of my little cousin(the first part), I even wrote a piece for him, here's the link My Little Superman , and my brother. ...

It's okay. Not exciting, not brilliant. It was okay. It's an 'emo' poem or as I say it 'I am wallowing in self-pity' poem, and I think poems like these ...