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There are two main ways that I'm aware of to create suspense. One is the brute-force method, which you attempt here and which authors such as H. P. Lovecraft have ...

I loved the quiet, the peacefulness, the solitary pleasure of life. It was as if there was nothing I could not do. These two sentences seem to clash a little ...

If I had to go ahead and describe this work in two words, with all its ups and downs and sideways, the two words would be "like Solstice". Like Solstice, ...

I didn't write a review for the previous scene, mainly because I felt I couldn't say enough to fill an entire review -- which is a good thing -- so ...

I'm here again! So this part right here amused me: I've known you since you were born! It's interesting because it's his mother that says this. It's as if an ...

Hey Zo-- I've decided I'll go through every scene of the play you have so far and review them in sequence. So expect more soon! The one thing that jumped ...

So I've read this three times, on two separate days, before I felt ready to type up a review. This is quite a phenomenal piece, and I've felt dread in ...

Ah, this was a neat little vignette. Stylistically solid writing, something of a minor plot, more or less a satisfying conclusion. But I think there are many more places you ...

I was always under the impression that the beauty of such ultra-short stories is that, despite their length, a plot may be seen (or extrapolated) from the bare start that ...

After two read-throughs, my impression of the story is such: this is about twin sisters, one of whom is dead, communicating with each other via some unexplored means (I suspect, ...

Heya A/B. Well, it's been a while since I've done a real review for you, so I suppose this is a good time and place to remedy this situation. So ...

First off, the other reviews are baffling me. Did you guys even read the piece? What do you mean, "what happens next"? She dies, that's what happens. She was the ...

When I was little, I would draw these people on pieces of paper, cut them out, and then play with them like they were action figures -- we didn't have ...

Heya Stela; sorry it took me a while to get to this. It's been hard to get free time lately. So overall, this piece did not leave me hollow. It ...

Sorry for the late review, my notifications didn't really let me know that someone posted on my thread. Odd, that. First of all, you characterize so many individuals, but you ...