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Hey there! I really enjoyed this piece, it was fun, emotive and entertaining. I thought that the characters were really good and really well developed (barely know them but I'm ...

Hey there! I thought this short story was brilliant. It was so clever and moving so great work! Until a few paragraphs in I didn't realise that it was the ...

Hi :) I really liked this short story - the rhyme especially made it really interesting and I even read it aloud to myself and it sounded lovely... It must ...

Hi :) Just read your piece - I thought it was really good - the description in particular was really good, I felt entranced in it and really want to ...

I thought this was a really well-written piece. The writing has a sort of innocence to it which really captures the child's thoughts well. The final two sentences and the ...

Hi! I really liked this story and thought it was really well written. I liked the twist at the end too but agree with lonewolf22's suggestion to make the part ...