captainearth

thanks payne

just did a reedit

just did a reedit

i just did the reedit so pls read it aging thanks for tips and for the review

plus this is not finalized yet like the punctuation being in the wrong place and so fores also this is a fan fiction of the show RWBY mix whit the ...

also this is a defernt crow not the one from the show

this is RWBY fan fiction, and what I'm going for is telling the story long before RWBY story time line how grimm came to be and i haven't got to ...

thank for the honesty okay first off Grimm are a race of mutant animals that are very lager that cant be stop,and Menrow you are getting the right idea of ...

thanks

longest story i have ever made

so do i katie

good work *claps*

yes i will be fixing my grammar in this story and yes you did get your point across and i agred that is need some work ill have the edit ...

thanks you and ill start on getting it fix

thank you and ill start making edits from thing you pointed out in the story and this my first novel I've every made