captain.classy

Hey there best friend! Ha, there we go using the same ol' name again! Don't worry, I have my favorite that I use in every story, too! As always, this ...

Hey there! This is very interesting. I'm excited to see what will happen after you edit and rewrite this. As is, this is more of a skeleton. I hope I ...

Hey there! This was good. It was a little bland at parts, and a little choppy at others, but I'm going to try to help you fix this. :) Quotes ...

Hey there! -- sorry I am just now getting to the review, even though I said I would last night. :P Alright. So this was good. It wasn't great, and ...

Hey there! So, this is cute. I can imagine certain things, only because I've been to a horse stable a couple of times. However, if you've never been there, you ...

Hey hun! I love how you keep using Matty and Ali in your stories. It's like how I use Kisa in every story and every SB I join! XD Anywho, ...

Hey there! This was pretty good, thought I do have a few negative opinions... The beginning was great. When I first read it, however, I thought that she was pointing ...

Goodness Rosey, you and your reviews amaze me. Anywho, I didn't read her review so I hope I don't repeat anything. To put it short, there is only one thing ...

Hey there! Hmm... I have to admit, at first I thought this was going to be another disappointing fantasy piece. You know, those unoriginal ones that have the kings and ...

Hey there! This was an interesting read. On to the review... Tense I am going to devote a section of this review to tense because you change it a lot ...

Hey there! Wow, I am so impressed by this. You are an amazing scripter. Other scripts that I have read don't even compare. I can feel things coming to life. ...

Hey there! Sorry this took too long - a lot of homework lately. Anyways, my first impression before I start my review: this was nice. It had a good feel ...

Hey there! Characters/Plot This is a very interesting concept, though I'm not quite sure what it all means yet. What I'm afraid of is how much you have done with ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! If you need any help with anything, just drop me or any other green-ling a PM! So, this was really fun to read. It was ...

Hey there! This is really good. Quotes 'N' Comments "Oh, Jason heard something, huh?" I find the 'Jason' in this sentence a weird part to emphasize. I think the better ...