captain.classy

I love this. I can relate to it so much its umbelievable. I only have one suggestion, and that is you have small lines, then short lines, and its hard ...

Hey! Quick review. So, i really felt like your prologue was a little cliche. I mean, i think i have written something just like this! maybe you can change it ...

Tell me what you think. (This is my first poem, hope you like it) :D. Wind whips at my hair, Creating a witch-like pose around my head. This line is ...

Okay, this was really confusing, and a little boring. I like the concept, its really random, and maybe unrealistic (?) but I think if you find a better way to ...

Ooh goodness. I got chills. This definitely made me excited! I like it. I have the urge to read more! Him being in a crowd shouting is so mysterious, and ...

Hello! First I have to say that I really like your title. It was confusing at first, but now that I know fall is a person, its all good. Your ...

It makes me sad how the couldn't end up together! But, all in all, I liked it! The phrases you used about love definantly made your story. Thanks for telling ...

I love this idea! The poem was okay, but the idea is brilliant. There is one line in particular that I liked... "I Fell In Love Without You." I do ...

'Ello! This is my first review, so beware! Is it possible to just suddenly Not call and share our story? This is my favorite quote. It really makes it clear ...