captain.classy

Ah, I'm bored. Haha, I am exited to read your story, but this pretty much sounded like an essay. How am I supposed to say something about plot and characters ...

This is just the prologue to an idea I have, tell me if it's any good. Oh, and the title isn't final. At all. I know that it's horrible x) ...

Oh goodness, such a sad, sad story. Here I go: Plot I know where you are going, I just don't know how you are going to end, and that makes ...

Alright, so since everyone corrected things, I would just like to talk about content. Your main character annoys me, and from what I have learned from experience with my own ...

So sorry it took me long to review. I have been away. So, there was one little nit-pick: Creatures as small as us can never overpower such huge monsters on ...

Hiya butters! Lassie here with her speedy reviews. Just a few things: He wants me to follow me, it’s important he says. So, I think there should be a comma ...

Hiya, captain here. There's one thing: "Yes, really! How could I.? " I don't think you meant for there to be a period there, also, hmm? So, your writing style ...

Nick Austin. Now I would have to wake up in the mornings, only to see his face when I left for school. Why did he move? And why is it ...

Oh lord, my pride had gotten the better of me. I laughed out loud at this, which is bad because I'm in class! I mean just because I was thrown ...

Oh my goodness, Pink! I liked this so much! Okay, just a few things: I gulped, hearing Nicholas’s name. Even though I had only fought him once before, he didn’t ...

Hiya, Classy here for a review! So, your story makes me want more. I'm not sure yet if it is the quality of your writing or the base of your ...

Okay, well I have to admit I do want to see what happens. This story is so weird and random. I think I like it, but you rushed it and ...

Hiya! Classy here. My corrections will be in bold. Don't forget to look for the punctuation changes. They are a little bit difficult to see that they are bold. She ...

Hiya! Just here for a little grammar help! My corrections are in bold. Nothing that the world can do Will ever separate us two. As you can see, I switched ...

Hmm... Well, I think your words flow very well. But, I don't know, I'm just a little confused. Did you mention where they were, or am I just confused? This ...