Published December 23, 2009
Prologue was deleted because it was boring... very boring.
Some "Disclaimers"
-This story's about Greek gods but does not reflect my personal beliefs
-I know the plot and character relationships do not follow traditinal mythology. Is for fun.
Go on to next chapter!!
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Thank you all for your input and I know the prologue is boring. It was partly just to help me organize my thoughts. I may end up just getting rid of it. The first chapter has been posted here.
I have to agree with the other reviewers. This does sound like an essay. The point of a prologue is to get the reader interested in your story, not to bore them to death before they even start.
Also, on the subject of your subject (har har har), you may want to make sure you are up-to-date on your Greek history. Like, it would be really dumb if you made up a bunch of stories of the Gods that weren't originally in Greek Mythology.
This story has the potential to be either really lame, or really cool.
PM for questions
Cheers,
-Lena
Ah, I'm bored. Haha, I am exited to read your story, but this pretty much sounded like an essay.
How am I supposed to say something about plot and characters when there isn't any? haha, please PM me through when you have the first chapter up. I'm sure it will be interesting. Your writing isn't half-bad. Let's see what you can do with it.
~Classy
Ok it was really good. I can't wait till you start writing the actual story. Please PM me when you do. See ya!!
Cassie