User avatar

captain.classy

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Jump part 2

    Here I am! Finally! The man bellowed, and Marks head throbbed with a sudden pain. He looked at the chair. In his mind, he pictured it hitting the man. This ...

    Mar 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Jump part 1

    Hiya, I'm about to read the part you requested, but thought I'd read this first. Susan followed the strange, bald man in the white lab coat. However, she wasn’t sure ...

    Mar 11, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Jurassic Park: El Infierno Verde

    Haha *inside joke much?* I'm going to bed now, will review later. Saw it and had to comment. *saves space for epic review* :P EDIT: This review will not be ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Locust King - Chapter 1

    This story seems very promising. I think the best thing about his piece is the transition between the two people in the car, and when they reach their hotel room. ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: An Ordeal of the Titanic

    *likes* I enjoyed this. I would have proffered more information, more plot, but these are journal entries, and who has much time to write when they're about to die? I ...

    Mar 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The World Is Dying (Prologue)

    This is very interesting Olli. I don't have much to comment on, since there isn't much here. All I would like to say is that I don't believe you need ...

    Mar 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Death's Blossom -- Prologue

    Arris! I saw this was yours and just had to read it. This was a good read. It was a bit confusing. How you left us with nothing, it can ...

    Mar 8, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: An essay on the history of ideas-Aristotle and Plato

    This review took me twenty minutes! Ahh! However, there are some major differences as well as some similarities in the political ideologies of the two Greek philosophers’ ant it is ...

    Mar 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hemlock

    My my, three very odd characters! haha So I'm trying to steer away from the nit-picks, but I have one teeny tiny quote - sorry! Michael was seventeen and had, ...

    Mar 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Only Sixteen

    Goodness. I agree with Lena, you shouldn't continue this. Your plot, your characters, your setting, everything came together in a perfect manner, and there is no need to continue and ...

    Mar 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: This is Reel Trash.

    Hey! Sorry it took me so long to do this review, but here I am! Okay, so let us talk about your opening paragraph. It was uninteresting, and made me ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bird of Recess

    So sorry this took so long! Well, I'm here, as requested. Such a powerful poem! Goodness, where do I start? I love your theme here, algebra being compared to a ...

    Mar 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Janitors - Chapter 1 (Final Edit)

    Sorry this took so long! I really liked this, it did a lot for me. You seemed to let us right into the action with no problem at all. Usually ...

    Mar 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darkness Unpolluted

    I just realized I never did a review on this... sorry! I liked it. Your phrases were definitely poetic, and flowed together very well. The only line that didn't fit ...

    Feb 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode to Kamas

    Yeller, I swear, I love your creativeness! Though short and simple, the fact that you wrote it about someone I now makes it that much better. I love the rhymes, ...

    Feb 25, 2010


Don't gobblefunk around with words.
— Roald Dahl