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Re: Jump part 2
Here I am! Finally! The man bellowed, and Marks head throbbed with a sudden pain. He looked at the chair. In his mind, he pictured it hitting the man. This ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Jump part 1
Hiya, I'm about to read the part you requested, but thought I'd read this first. Susan followed the strange, bald man in the white lab coat. However, she wasn’t sure ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Jurassic Park: El Infierno Verde
Haha *inside joke much?* I'm going to bed now, will review later. Saw it and had to comment. *saves space for epic review* :P EDIT: This review will not be ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: The Locust King - Chapter 1
This story seems very promising. I think the best thing about his piece is the transition between the two people in the car, and when they reach their hotel room. ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: An Ordeal of the Titanic
*likes* I enjoyed this. I would have proffered more information, more plot, but these are journal entries, and who has much time to write when they're about to die? I ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: The World Is Dying (Prologue)
This is very interesting Olli. I don't have much to comment on, since there isn't much here. All I would like to say is that I don't believe you need ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Death's Blossom -- Prologue
Arris! I saw this was yours and just had to read it. This was a good read. It was a bit confusing. How you left us with nothing, it can ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: An essay on the history of ideas-Aristotle and Plato
This review took me twenty minutes! Ahh! However, there are some major differences as well as some similarities in the political ideologies of the two Greek philosophers’ ant it is ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Hemlock
My my, three very odd characters! haha So I'm trying to steer away from the nit-picks, but I have one teeny tiny quote - sorry! Michael was seventeen and had, ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Only Sixteen
Goodness. I agree with Lena, you shouldn't continue this. Your plot, your characters, your setting, everything came together in a perfect manner, and there is no need to continue and ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: This is Reel Trash.
Hey! Sorry it took me so long to do this review, but here I am! Okay, so let us talk about your opening paragraph. It was uninteresting, and made me ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Bird of Recess
So sorry this took so long! Well, I'm here, as requested. Such a powerful poem! Goodness, where do I start? I love your theme here, algebra being compared to a ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: The Janitors - Chapter 1 (Final Edit)
Sorry this took so long! I really liked this, it did a lot for me. You seemed to let us right into the action with no problem at all. Usually ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Darkness Unpolluted
I just realized I never did a review on this... sorry! I liked it. Your phrases were definitely poetic, and flowed together very well. The only line that didn't fit ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Ode to Kamas
Yeller, I swear, I love your creativeness! Though short and simple, the fact that you wrote it about someone I now makes it that much better. I love the rhymes, ...
Feb 25, 2010
