captain.classy

This was interesting. I really did want to read more, and that's a great thing. Now onto the review. Characters Chloe - She's very 'flat;' she isn't 'round.' This means ...

Hello! Classy here, welcome to YWS! I must say that I have no trouble with your rhymes. I actually thought the poem flowed and rhymed beautifully! This really was such ...

Hai! Classy here! So, the first thing I thought when I read this was commas, commas, commas. Punctuation is better than no punctuation, but more-than-necessary punctuation is worse than no ...

Hey El! So, this piece has some great lines in it, but it doesn't seem complete, which can be a problem. I think the part you're missing is the answer ...

Hi there! Classy here for a review. Realistic-ness So, this story isn't very realistic. I like the plot, but there are some things that just don't make sense. He should ...

Your writing is not boring at all. In fact, I was extremely entertained while reading this. My favorite part was that at the end, I wasn't expecting more. It finished. ...

Let me start off by saying that you're a wonderful writer. I was very delighted while reading this. It had superb grammar, and barely any misspellings. Plus every sentence flowed, ...

I must say, I really enjoyed this! The first stanza pretty much clears up any confusion the title has given off. The second stanza kind of adds to the confusion. ...

Hey Conrad! You always give excellent reviews, and I saw you didn't have any, so here I am! I really liked this. When I read the first paragraph, I didn't ...

This was different, in a good way. I like how you weren't afraid to branch out and go beyond what other's post on here. And best of all, you didn't ...

Hey there! Classy here for a review! “And he felt the baby bump. He knows you’re pregnant. He thinks it’s his, and he’s pissed off that you didn’t tell him. ...

'Ello Forest! slim, curvy I don't think you can be both. I really think it's one or the other. You could say that she has curves, because that would imply ...

Classy here, time for a review. I don't say this often, but this really was amazing. :) Plot I think this would be better as a second chapter. Here you ...

I kind of agree with perdido. This poem makes me pity the writer. Why is her voice and tone like this? Is this your voice, or a character's voice? What ...

Haha, "we're gonna need a bigger boat." Classic... So, I liked this. The dialogue felt real. I felt like I was actually listening to Jack and Will speak, and I ...