captain.classy

Hiya! Let me just say that this poem gives off wonderful imagery. I love the last two lines so much it's crazy. I could see everything you were describing. It's ...

Hi there! So, this is a good poem. It's sad that this poem's theme is probably the most commonly-used theme for poems, but what're you going to do, eh? What ...

Hiya! Goodness, this was so much fun to read. I'm a little confused as to why there are so many bloody clothes on the floor. I mean I know why ...

Hiya! This was cool and just a tad bit annoying. Her saying 'I don't want to be pretty' just annoys me for some reason. She seems to be pitying herself, ...

Hiya! Classy here Yah I'm confused about the worm part. For people who have never read the play, it makes no sense and just seems weird. But, don't change it, ...

Hiya! You know, I usually look the other way at vampire stories, but I quite liked this. It doesn't seem like you're taking the, "Oh I'm a sweet teenage vampire ...

Hiya! I like this idea. This really isn't a beginning of a story, it's kind of like something you'd see on the back of a book. The summary. It invites ...

Hiya! So I thought this was a good piece of writing, but isn't really a short story. It seemed more like two character profiles pushed into one block of writing. ...

Hmm, I'm not really sure what to say about this. First, you should really separate your work into paragraphs. If you look at other stories, you should see that there ...

Hiya! Classy here to review. This was very touching. I think the idea is brilliant! I really don't have much criticism. I think you might have rushed things a bit, ...

Hiya! Classy here for a review. Let's get started. What I really like about this piece is so realistic it is. Most teenage girls are like this: obsessive, controlling, all ...

Hiya! Classy here, let's get started. So this story is very interesting. It would be even more interesting if there weren't so many grammatical errors. Try reading this out loud ...

Hiya! Classy here. I wouldn't categorize this as a short story. It has no plot or dialogue. It seems more like a personal essay or something like that. It seems ...

Hey Rosey! Of course I liked this, I mean who wouldn't? Dragons, tension, great dialogue, it has everything I love. The only thing that bothers me is that you open ...

This is very cute. I liked the lines and how smoothly your sentences formed... after the first two paragraphs. Read the first two paragraphs aloud. Do you see how choppy ...