captain.classy

Hey there! This was simply... wow. I did not expect it from the title. But, since the title confused me, I guess I didn't expect anything! What I'm trying to ...

Hey there! So keep in mind throughout this review that I am completely opposed to prologues, exceptions on very rare occasions. Yours isn't an exception. What I mean by that ...

Hey there! I'm finally here. So, my first overall thought of this is that it seemed a bit 'pushed.' I can understand where you're coming from, but I'm not quite ...

Hey there! Very interesting. As I was nearing the end of the story, I was thinking about what I would say in my review. I was going to say something ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! Quotes 'n' Comments He leaned his head on my back as I sat between his legs. I just thought I'd point out to you ...

Hey there! Here as promised. Quotes 'n' Comments Her long fingers moved slowly, concentrating on her work. So, I don't know about anyone else, but with the description of 'long ...

Hey there! Here, as requested. So in your request, you talked about how no one has reviewed your grammar mistakes yet, so I'm guessing that's what you want me to ...

Hey there! Here to review! I must admit, I had to go through and read it a second time to catch anything because I was so caught up in the ...

Hey there! Okay so I stink at reviewing poetry, so bear with me. Quotes and Comments You have such a strong beginning, but then you get softer as you go ...

Hey there (: Okay, so the first thing I thought after reading this was: why? Don't get me wrong, I did enjoy reading this, but it is also about things ...

Hey there! So I'm confused. I thought Kains was her boyfriend? (Kains is an awesome name, by the way) Why is she calling Matt her love and dreaming about him? ...

Hey there! I really like this. I think your descriptions are nice, however I would like to know more about the woman who appeared to recruit her. The way you ...

Hey there! I don't know why no one has commented on this, because it's very interesting! What I think you should do is slow down. You throw description after description ...

Hey Benny Boop! So, one bad thing I have to say is that... well this isn't necessarily boring, it's just a bit slow. Do you see how three paragraphs down ...

Elinor! This chapter is lovely! Far better than your first. Anywho, I don't have any criticism. I think the characters in this are perfect. However, I think you should mention ...