captain.classy

Herro! This is the first review I've done in months so bear with me... Overall, I was really confused about this? To me it seems that in most novels or ...

Hi there! Oooh this is definitely sad. I really like it though. I think you've got a good, solid story line here! There are a couple of things that I ...

Hi there! So, you could say that I'm a bit confused. I don't really believe this belongs in sci-fi stories. In fact, it doesn't really belong in anything other than ...

Hi there! Ahah, my two favorite things, zombies and Alice, compiled into one awesome short story. Thanks for the entertainment! Anyways, this is pretty good for a short story. I ...

Hi there! Hmm, this seems to be a story about, well, nothing. xD For a lack of a better word. Now, I went to the contest and read through the ...

Hi there! This is a nice start to a romance novel, however I think it might be moving too quickly. I think you should wait a little while to introduce ...

Hey there! Oh shnap! So many great pieces are being requested in my WRFF thread, it's AMAZING. Wow, so, you probably already know this is fascinating, so I'm not going ...

Hi there! Wow, Butters, this is amazing. It's probably the most intricate story I've read on YWS. It's sad, and cinematic, and confusing all at the same time. I think ...

Hi there! Skins, you're amazing at writing. You put words down on paper ok, but its those words, the moral in them, the meaning, that really hook me. You don't ...

Hi there Woah, I'm very impressed with the entries for this recent short story generator contest. A lot of them have been very inventive, and though the topics are silly, ...

Hi there! This is a very short chapter. Very short, a bit confusing, and most if it really isn't necessary. Quotes 'N' Comments Some how I felt as though she ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a very promising first chapter. You seem to have the characters pretty much figured out, and as you probably planned, I hate Elizabeth. The grandmother ...

Hi there! This is really good, and really reminds me of my friend's novel Into the Depths. Anyways, I think you've built a really solid first chapter here. You've introduced ...

Hi there! aha this is so cool. I really like where you went with this. I don't think I could of come up with a story nearly this out there ...

Hey there! You can obviously tell that you spent a lot of time on this. It's absolutely wonderful, and the writing was flawlessly enjoyable. If you keep this up and ...