cannoncomplex

first impression of this piece of work was a second point of perspective especcially with the word "you" on the first sentence. Other than that, there was a little confusion ...

This was a little interesting since the story gave a curious and almost haunting mood. A date at three in the morning with a woman who in her fifties claim ...

that was an interesting concept you got there. I like how you managed to create the normality of the ninja. Just as the story hadsaid, ninja are often seen in ...

hi, i'm cannoncomplex and i'm here to comment your work. Okay, my general impression of the work was a sense of the anti-hero. We got a pillar woken up and ...

Ah, what an interesting concept...I liked the ending generally. It had a suspenseful pace coming with it. i also loved the concept of the innocent falsely accused for a crime. ...

hello, jasmine... I'm here to review your work...:) well, the general impression after reading the story was some sort of the neglectful mother where the mother denies her child because ...

This is my first review, so i'll give my best. Overall, the story seemed to have a mix with the context. The first part of the story introduced the reader ...