canislupis

I'm glad to see that you edited this! It's better now. I think, coming back to this, that other reviewers may have been a bit too harsh, since this was ...

I have to say I actually enjoyed reading this. It has a good, if depressing, point, and though it was ackward in some parts, I still like it. I'm not ...

Yeah, this is really intresting! I can feel the potential dripping......:) PM me if you continue this, pretty please?

Hah. I mostly like drawing and writing/reading about them.....

EDITED!!! Comments plz?

Huh? Its not THAT bad...... Why say that? if you really don't like it, just delete it off the site!!!!!! Besides, isn't that kinda the point of this site? You ...

Yeah, I'll say. she does have a point though. I still really like your idea, but it could be developed upon more especially because this kind of story has been ...

Woah, I wasn't expecting that. Great job!! This really made me laugh out-loud.

Very nice!! Aparently I came here to late. Would you rather have me critique something else that hasn't gotten as many replies? PM me. :D

Wow thanks, and thats a good idea about the contest... I'll just work out the kinks first... This was helpful, thanks again.

Thank you! Overall, this was not my favorite piece of work. :) Just kindof an interesting idea that popped into my head. Thanks for the review! (Oh, and fro future ...

Hmm, thanks! I'll keep those suggestions in mind.

Smooth, that flowed very nicely. I don't really have anything negative to say, I like your idea and it was delivered very well. I got the message clearly, and it ...

Hah, I guess that is the problem with sharing a name with a season. :) Any suggestions on how to clear it up?

OOH! You're right, I DID switch tenses, I just noticed. AHA! I will go and edit when I have time. Thanks alot! I guess it's because I'm not used to ...