canislupis

Hey! I was going through starring all of your work when I realized I haven't reviewed this yet! *Gasp* I really like the originality and style of this piece, but ...

I haven't read that particular title, but I really like some of the other ones I've been reading. I haven't seen any of the TV shows either, but I'm going ...

Ok.... One sec...... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!...... ~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm Composed now. :) Very nice! *Stares at table in the corner suspiciously and wonders what it might be saying about me behind my back* ...

Congratz on getting second.:) This is really really good! One of the things Azila said: Like I said in my post about the contest, I love the way you make ...

Ok... Here is your belated review. Congratz on getting honorable mention in Azila's contest! First, the typos and corrections. :twisted: mould... nitpicky, but I'm pretty sure this is spelled 'mold'..

Hmm... I liked this. It was engaging and well-written, and all the descriptions seemed to fit. My one comment is the way you use lots of short sentences, such as ...

I don't really like them. They seem to have bunched all the animals into generic groups of good an evil, and it NEVER changes. Redwallers are perfect, and ferrets, stoats, ...

Erm.... yes they were. One of the main characters dies in the end, and there is a romance between two people that would be realyl hard to understand if you ...

Ooh! I read these a while ago. It goes a bit fast now that I've read them for the third time, but the other series have a bit more depth. ...

AKKK!! six replies already! Urggh! Anyway, Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you have fun. :) About this post: I really like it! I'd like to have a little more description, if that's ...

You can get a learner's permit here at sixteen, I think. ;) It varies depending on where you live. Hmm, I suppose I echo what others have said about plot, ...

This reminded me a bit of Midsummer night's dream, by Shakespeare... :) One comment I had was that you are doing a lot of "he walked over and did this, ...

Wow! Do you know that "you are my sunshine" was my absolute favorite song when I was little? This really disturebed me. :) Besides all the stuff that azila pointed ...

GRACE!!!!!!!! hiya.. :lol: Anyway, this is nice! Am i wrong in thinking I recognize some of the scenes in your story? So...... You are using some nice descriptive language, and ...

I think the reason you haven't gotten any reviews yet is becuase the paragraphs aren't spanced out properly. This is your first post, so for the next time, remember to ...