canislupis

Hi there! I have lead a normal life. I come from a good elvin family and a heritage of warriors. I have a brother and two sisters I’ve spent my ...

Hey there! I saw this story in your siggy, thought I'd give it a go. :) Here are my nitpicks. Josette impatiently paced the length of her Father’s lodgings. What ...

Actually, I think nine books are out, with the tenth on it's way--but only in England. In the U.S., the seventh is about to come out. Personally, I found them ...

I actually read this book first--and am frantically waiting for the first to arrive now. I requested both from the library, and of course, there were something like 111 people ...

Hey there, I just read through this entire series in about twenty minutes. :) Though there are a few errors and typos, they are pretty seldom and the whole thing ...

I'm sorry to say I hated these books... Wow, I feel really outnumbered. They were just so cheesy.. Seriously, every five seconds he was pulled into another incredibly dangerous situation ...

First, here are a couple of consistent errors I saw: 1. Your title is incorrectly spelled. The word you're looking for is "write". ;)I would title your story instead of ...

I can feel his skin brushing against mine. My hand is a circle around his wrist, but doesn't grasp not grasping it. Not yet. My other hand points towards Heaven. ...

Ireland stood in front of the plastic folding chair wearing a black dress, and swaying slightly because of the high heels she had on. Hot tears ran down her face ...

Hi there! I liked this piece--enough conflict so it wasn't boring, and also the potential for emotional impact. I'm having a hard time putting to words my biggest problem was, ...

Hi! I was just looking through your portfolio, seeing if there was anything you neglected to tell me about, and there! Aha! Nice try. :P (I am very bored right ...

Hi! First, I have a question: Are you meaning this to be set in actual mideval history? If so, then this is Hist. fiction. If not, then maybe you should ...

Interesting.... I normally don't like fanfic much but I enjoyed reading this all the same. My one complaint was the part at the very end... why did Harry attack Ron? ...

Hey there! It looks like several people have suggested spacing this out more. I think I agree, but I think maybe it might be even better if you start with ...

Hi! You nailed it... This was hysterical. I love how Jacob is sulking in the corner. You really got everything without seeming overdone. I can't wait to read the other ...