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Re: U and I. U is my beloved love and I is the desperate me in love.
i like the how its a two person poem. the repetition is something i found to be enjoyably reading, even if it was a little tricky not stumbling over myself ...
Jul 5, 2020 -
Re: It's hard, Harder it goes by time...
I'm not good at grammar or at breaking these things down and reviewing them from a technical aspect. I liked your poem. its relatable to me and it makes me ...
Jul 5, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Gone
Hello, I'm calmly in danger. the opening made me wonder what was happening and why but as I read I got it. the following paragraphs made me question what would ...
Jul 5, 2020 -
Re: Four Walls
the feeling the poem gives is something many can relate to. friend growing distant, and long distance relationships falling apart. many have experienced what this poem explains and it brings ...
Jul 1, 2020 -
Re: blank
reading this reminded me of an old friend of mine. she was the type that didn't seem to think she deserved love. She always would lie about where she got ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: The sea, a piece of my heart
A lot of poems strike a cord with me. this is no different. it reminds me of one of the very few times I've been to the sea. It brought ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: ​Chapter 1 The not so great Jimmy
Hi this was a nice read. I find Jimmy to be funny as he does not know what the common everyday things are. although i know Jimmy is probably a ...
Jun 29, 2020
