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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The keys

    ~ Taylor! + Thanks a lot for the suggestion. + Yeah, I guess, I really need help with grammar so I appreciate your suggestion in the spoiler. :3 ~ paperbackheart ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Parallel: What I didn't learn in math

    :] wow! this poem's great! I wasn't really good at Maths but I truly get what you mean! :3 good job!

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite Chapter 14, 15, 16 and 17!

    --> thank you sMylinG! I hope that you'd be patient enough to wait because I still have a writer's block.. hahaha! :3 and thanks for all the help. love, CS

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite

    --> Hello, Mikko! + Thanks a lot for the help with the corrections, I admit that I really need that. Don't worry, I will edit "Love Suite" when I am ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite Chapter 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, and 13!!

    --> Dark Vanilla! + I appreciate the corrections! Thank you! I will add your feedback on my compilation. (You see, I should finish the whole story before I work on ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite Chapter Five, Six, Seven and Eight!

    ---> summerlovee + so glad that you loved Naddie, I was imagining one specific girl that inspired me to 'create' Naddie :3 haha, never knew that I could make her ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mind Reader

    --> Thanks for the review, Smyling and Phoenix.. That was all that I wanted when I post my literary works on any website :] ---> SMYLING, yeah, I tried to ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paolo

    sorry, if I wasn't good at understanding poems... how come that the title of this one is Ode to Moose?? Just wonderin' :) love, CS

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite Chapter Four

    --> I'm so glad you liked it guys, although I am having some troubles with the grammar and spelling :] Smyling>> you read my mind :] I'm not gonna tell ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Arachnophobia

    ------> whoa, this one's dark and really for scares! :] If you only knew how much I really, really love this. haha! Good job!

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grandpa

    ---> *clap-hands* ----> You got me in there! What more can I say! This poem's just soo good. ----> So, the narrator used to play Chess w/ her grandpa etc. ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite Chapter Three

    Smyling ---> thanks for the feedback! And can you please, point out my grammar/punctuation mistakes? because English was'nt really my first language and I'd be glad to know more from ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That Night

    --> love this one! :] Anyway, a little correction about the spelling of "wine". "Whine" means complaint and "Wine" means a drink, like white wine, sancerre, champagne.. :]

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Suite Chapter Two

    summerlovee, :)

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Death takes it all

    very realistic poem and yes, i love the feel of how scary death was in this poem :) I am speechless XD

    Feb 25, 2011


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