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I feel like it eludes to the happiness caused by this event, but it really doesn't come close to describing how somebody who really cares about the gay rights movement ...

I feel like I've just met my spirit animal. I love this short story and would read it if it was a 200 page book. I feel like, however, you ...

I love your imagery and it gives a clear depiction of a real end of the world. On a side note, I just read the book The Road by Cormac ...

You stuck to a clear message and even managed to stick a tone shift in at "You like me for those things," which is often admired when studying poetry. However, ...

I love the catching description line. The poem that followed was not a let down. My only critique would be to stick with one tense. You sort of jumped all ...

I can tell there's some kind of backstory to this, even if the poem doesn't clearly state much. I know from reading that the character regrets making some kind of ...

It's a complicated relationship that you described, but you did it well. I would have liked to see more of an exposition, such as how they know each other, or ...

I like it. It's dark and symbolic. I got thrown off in the middle (I think it's because you used the word "its" without clearly stating what you were referencing) ...

I love the imagery of this. The spacing of the lines make it kind of hard to read, but it's only your style, not mine. I can't really get one ...

I feel as if this story is more of a stream of thought more than a telling of an event. There are some parts that need to focus more on ...