bvbAngel

You're welcome! I hope to see more work like this on the future!

Thank you so much! My idea of why she went into the house anyways even after her thoughts told her nit to was because curiosity. Honestly the theme was that ...

Oh no its good. Be as harsh as you want. I want any help as possible. Thank you. I will work on it

You're welcome! If you ever need anything or questions just ask me. I'll try and help!

Honestly I'm not sure what genre it would be under. But i think it would go great with soft rock or light metal. Thank you so much! I'm glad that ...

Okay, I totally see what you're saying, thank you so much. Really the theme is both of what you said but if it make it better ill try to focus ...

Thank you! I never really thought about putting punctuation into a song before so I will work on that. And I also sing the song to try to make it ...

Awe thank you so much! And honestly I've never really looked at grammar but I will work on it! And what you were first saying, it is really sad that ...

Yes, I see what your saying. Thank you so much.

Thank you!! And yes, my favorite way to write is to write about how I'm feeling, or about a feeling that I know. So thank you so much

Thank you so much!!! And yes those these you pointed out about im instead of I'm, they were typos.

Oh no. I'm open to any help. I don't really plan to get a career writing but I love writing and I want to make my writing as pleasing for ...

Thank you so much. I understand what you are saying. I will work on it and I will proof read.

Thank you so much. I understand what you are saying. I will work on it and I will proof read.

Thank you so much. I will work on what you told me to. It was very helpful!