butterfliekisses

Hello again :) I truely am becoming a big fan of yours. Unlike alot of others shorts i have read on this site, yours never cease to please me. Your ...

Hi! I would like to tell you that i think you are an amazing writer. Your sentences flowed very well and at no point did i feel i was dragging ...

Hi! "I wait in the shadows Hoping never to see life the same again" This was a very good start. It really pulled in my attention and i was excited ...

Hi! Okay so the overall poem is written well, but i feel like you couldve added more detail. The bracketed part is unneccesary. Also, although rhyming isnt necessary it would ...

I like it. It's hard to review a short poem but this one is really good. I disagree with the reviewers below me and think that "never enough" can be ...

wow this is really good! I really like the image you created. The ending is really interesting too :) hopefully i can write something as good as this in the ...