burninhell

Haha! You and Flavio have a good Christmas and new year too!!!! :)

This was so smart I loved it! I thought that it was going to be like an escape from alcatraz sort of story and then the twist at the end ...

Thank you so much for your review! Half of the things you've pointed out I didn't even realize I was doing up until now, it's something I'll know to look ...

Hello there pricey So... This is amazing! It feels kind of lyrical if you get what I mean.. like the rhythm of it sounds nice in my head, if that ...

Thank you :D I'll make all those changes Thank you sosososo much :)

I proofread at that time too so I completely understand :) I think your rewrites are definitely better the ending had more shock value which has worked really well. But ...

Liked it is an understatement haha, and it gets better with the other parts!!!! I shall review those later for you, just at work at the moment, and I dont ...

True haha. I'm definitely left wondering. Like three days later and I'm still having mini daydreams about what could happen next :)

Awesome! Let me know when you've posted it, I wanna know what happens!

Thank you so much for the websites. The quotation mark rules often slip my mind when I'm writing. Not too sure why... And the comma splicing is something I'm a ...

Ahaha, fair enough, it was awesome anyways:D

This is a massive help, thank you so much. Grammar is my main issue and I'm trying to work on it, I'll check out those links that you sent and ...

Hiya Your points all make complete sense, I'll try to weave the parts about the tattoo into chapter 1. I added them in after an idea I had since writing ...

All good, I'll be looking out for them :)

All good :) I really liked it all the same. If you ever rewrite it let me know so I can go take a looksie :)