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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1 (Part 1)

    okay, I'm going to do my best at giving you a thorough review. First of all I'm going to suggest that you give your novel a title. It's a little ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Narrative Re: The Sonnet of Lochlan Doyle - [2]

    Oh my gosh. This is amazing. I want to read more like right now, but it seems I'm going to have to wait in suspense *sigh* I love how you're ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Narrative Re: The Sonnet of Lochlan Doyle - [1]

    Ohhhh, this is really gripping, I love it! I'm about to go and read the second chapter now, you've got me all curious. What's wrong with their mother? From the ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Sasha and Roe: Saint Cheryl's Slums (Part 1?)

    Hello :) Just thought I'd give you a quick review on your piece here. First off I'm going to start by saying that I'm definitely going to read the next ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Violet Wars: Part I, Chapter I

    Hiya, I'm gonna start off my review by repeating what Nyankolyfe has said, I hate to start on a negative but then it's all out of the way and I ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 1

    Hello, This is an amazing prologue. I know not all that many people like prologues, but personally I love them. You've created just the right amount of mystery in this ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Dancing Monkey

    Hiya, Just thought that I would start of by saying that I really like this! It was under lyrics so I felt like I had to mentally come up with ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Catalina III

    Well that was an ending and a half. I can say without one bit of a lie that I was not expecting most of that. The ending in particular. But ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Catalina II

    Hello again, Thought that I would give you another quick review before I go and read part three. First thing I'm going to say is how amazing this is. I'm ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Catalina

    Hello, I think the best way to start off this review is by saying that I absolutely love this! It was fast paced and your character development was amazing, I ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Nine

    So that was a mahusive plot twist. I feel so sorry for Alfie, he honestly just seems to be one of those characters who just winds up in the wrong ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Eight

    Nooooo, Chaser!!! Oh my, I think that chapter just dragged me on an emotional rollercoaster from real world to nightmare world. What are you doing to me! First of all ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Seven

    Oh my giddy monkeys! Seriously, you think it cant get better and then somehow it does, honestly I dont think I've read anything on this site that has me as ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Six

    Yay! I was happy as soon as I read the mini description thingy that said more Chaser. Because Chaser. There's literally no more reasoning to my happiness. I think I've ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Five

    Hehe, I honestly love Chaser. 'His expression turned dark again. “And you seem to be spouting the same nonsense. Don’t you know my life slogan?” He turned around, spreading his ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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