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I love it! I give you a gold star! I can't think of anything that neends to be fixed, but I do have a question. Is the little girl an ...

That's soooooo sweet and sad!!!! You wrote it beautifully and it kept my attion, which is a very hard thing to do. He laughed. Kayleigh smiled. She loved how his ...

Hold on, let me dry up the tears.......................................... There now I can see. That was very good. I absolutly love it! It made me cry. Well, this part made me ...

First off, I thought it was very good. In that short amount you wrote, it made me want to cry. That's very good. Next, I saw one mistake. As I ...

I have no idea what y'all are talking about! I'm in love with that book! I thought that it was the best one yet! I wish that Leah and Jacob ...

Hey! At last you post something!!!! I thought this was great!!I love it. I have two problems though. First, I know you haven't read the fourth book yet, but you ...

I'm a little confused. Hold on I'm going to read it again. I still don't get the point, but I do like parts of it. that her mother carved like ...

that is SO good! I love it! I have friends whose grandpa died, and she felt sooooooo, ummm calm? no relived after reading that!! I am in your dreams at ...

wow! thats amazing! It's over. It's so over. Your smell of cheap cologne is nauseating. Your once lovable touch makes my skin crawl. I can't believe I had once loved ...

I like it. “Yea, it’s just kinda sad, what happened to my father…” this moves alittle to fast to me. Save important stuff like that for latter on in the ...

I wail as he struggles to discover his keys. “I can’t find them!” he panics, digging in his pockets. I start jogging in place, hoping to keep warm as I ...

I liked it. I can see it becoming a longer story and something I would read. It would be a very interesting one to read. I like the airplane simile, ...

Hey, I liked it. It was a little confusing, though. What does he have to consider? What is he scared of, commitment? (Sorry if it's not spelled right!) Does he ...