bullhead21

I really like this poem because it’s simple yet sophisticated…it reminds me of those old classic poems. The rhyme flows smoothly and consistent throughout the poem which isn’t easy to ...

I think it's well-written poem because of its simplicity yet well put together especially the alliteration such as “lover…summer” and “sway…away” it flows very smoothly. But your eighth li

I LOVE THIS PIECE! There are so many things I want to talk about it that I can’t express accurately but I will try. I think this is a perfect ...

I enjoyed reading this poem because of the different techniques you used. The personification of darkness was used well and also the cat. It’s very clear that the cat is ...

This piece…has a lot going on! The grammar and syntax definitely needs some editing. I think you are trying to convey a satire but it feels like you are just ...

I enjoyed this poem because of it’s simplicity yet it invokes strong feelings towards the reader. Also the personification of death is brilliant because it creates an intimate relationship between ...

I think this is an interesting piece overall but I am a bit confused whether you are strictly talking about the child because there are some several concepts you bring ...

I like this piece! It has several dimensions to it but I think it’s more of a satire. First of all, I love the choppy complex sentences in the first ...

This poem is very simple but because of that, I think it’s reflecting your state of mind. It’s straight-forward and contains a grounded theme to it but if you would ...

I think you would have made your story more interesting if you used a different point of view and imply more details to evoke emotions towards the reader. Also adding ...