bugbug368

I like the beginning. It pulls the reader in. I found this easy to like and have no nit picks as far as I know. So well done and keep ...

Thank you Titan4ever, I appreciate your love of my writing, it encourages me to write more! And, make sure you get the word around about this novel, I would like ...

This isn't my thing. You seem to not be very good at punctuation or anything. This doesn't work for me. Sorry. :evil:

Wow! Great improvement! I love how you describe the sun illuminating the forest and stuff. Well done, great work and I enjoyed it so much better! :wink: - bugbug368 :pirate1:

Cheers, rayhutch! I love it that everybody loves this too! Thank you for your comments and I'll be adding very soon... :pirate2:

Wow, thanks so much. Weird because I do like Meg Cabot's writing... :D Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me :)

Wow. I really enjoyed this. It's intense, short but that doesn't matter. Well done, so keep up the good work!

Omg omg omg omg! I love you guys! You make me feel so happy, I will definatly continue this. Thank you sooooooo much for your positive comments. :mrgreen:

This is really good and I enjoyed it. Good wording and writing skills. I enjoyed it and will be looking out for more additions soon! :wink:

I liked it, poems aren't really my kind of thing but I found this very good. Keep up the good writing! :D

I do like it, so keep it up. You use good words to keep the readers attention. So keep writing! :wink:

Thank you for my reviews! They're very helpful. Jess' dad did invite two or three other people, they just said they didn't want to go. He he. :wink:

Thank you. I won't change it all right now, because it takes a long time to submit, so I'll do it later. I'll change it on my word document as ...

OMG! Thank you for such postive comments. I really appreciate it :wink:

Hey, no don't do that! It would be good if you changed it here and there. It would be sad to just give it up. Poor thing. Lonely, sitting there. ...