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thanks, I'll try and get some help to correct it and send you the corrected version.
This is really good and I enjoyed it. Good wording and writing skills. I enjoyed it and will be looking out for more additions soon!
Generally I like this but honestly I'm really distracted by the grammar and spelling mistakes at the minute so I'm finding it difficult to read (even though it's short) without stopping all of the time. If you could do a proofread of this and then repost it and message me I'll do a more comprehensive review for you