bubblewrapped

There! I really went wild with the commas, and, wonder of wonders, it actually kinda looks better. **sigh** I need to fire my wordprocessing prog. My lack of dialogueness(?) is ...

**moans** Stupid dialogue grammar. What is this discrimination against full stops, anyway? **glares** Gah. LOL, anyway, I'll go through and edit when I get the time (its practically midnight here ...

I wrote this a while ago and just reread it tonight- liking it, I thought I'd post it here for review and revision. Be brutal, people! :lol: ...no, seriously. Dont ...

Actually (you cant have known this, so dont worry) it was about this story my mum told me when we were walking down the street; she said that there was ...

Me, trying to be clever. :oops: I know, I know. But someone's misspelling of "wasteland" (i.e. as "waistland") set me off. I take no responsibility for the errors of others, ...

Thanks - I've used some of your suggestions and fiddled around a bit, I think it works a lot better now :D Glad you like it. I've become very attached ...

Thanks for your comments, everyone. PsyLynx, I've got a couple of things to say to you - (1) Please dont tell me what I'm trying to do. You dont know, ...

I loved it too. Very powerful. Kudos!

Not that I understood what you just said, but thanks, LOL. I kind of went weird with this one. It happened. I'm still not sure if I like it :? ...

Yeah it flows more now.

Personally I think the swan skin is best, the others are either overly simplistic or too busy for my tastes. Just my 2 cents.

I'm just going to start "The Shadow Catcher" at the moment. Cant wait! Anyway, now that I have a little more time I'll elaborate; WITHOUT CHARITY By Michelle Paver When ...

Now that I can speak again...that is, type again...well, you know what I mean. What I mean is, I'd tell you how fantastic you are, but since you wouldnt care, ...

Yuhuh it sucks muchly. Oh and I'm just beginning to KEEP writing fiction...I write fiction in bits and bobs and have a trillion unfinished stories...this is, like, the longest I've ...

You're losing your touch, Incandescence. :lol: