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  • Other » Health, Horror Re: Step by step guide to stay focused

    Hey VintageGirl, thanks for the review. Yes I was considering leaving the horror tag out for the surprise element, but I thought it might put some people off if I ...

    Jun 20, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 1.2

    Hey Mint! Thanks for the wonderful review. I'm sure future chapters will answer some of your questions, though not without creating more I'm sure. Thanks again. - brotherGeo

    Jun 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 1.1

    Hey Mint, thanks for the wonderful review!! Your comment about Brandon Sanderson's Mistborn warms my heart. I love that series and that author I'm glad you enjoyed this story, i ...

    Jun 6, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 2.3

    Thanks for the review... and editing! lol Glad you enjoyed it, reminded me to upload the next chapter or chapters. Anyway if you like dystopian, check out my Keep Smiling ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 2.1

    Thanks for the Review! This was a more dialogue driven part of the chapter, yes. The actual chapter is a 6k word long mess that I had to break up ...

    Apr 15, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 2.1

    Thanks for the review! :)

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Realistic Re: Behind the Mask

    Thanks for the review! I thought it was more flawed, i was prepared to have do some quick editing, but im glad you liked it.

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Realistic Re: Behind the Mask

    Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Overflow - Chapter 1.2

    Thanks for the review i'll take what you said into consideration, I appreciate constructive criticism. I'll have to run through my chapters again to fix up those minor errors. I ...

    Mar 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Politics Re: Keep Smiling - chapter 1

    Thanks Harry!

    Sep 12, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Friendly kidnappers V2

    Hello Comrade MoonIris! I would give you a review but i'm kinda busy, rest assured i will later. I'm just here to say, you don't have to create a new ...

    Aug 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (5.1)

    I honestly thought of my story becoming an anime too. Anime is the best man. :D

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Outlaw for Hire: Chapter 6

    Thanks for the review Harry! :D The Beastkin politics and Enroth and his new sword; i kinda rushed while exhausted and did't clean it up too much. But i'm glad ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.1

    You’d think we were in some fantasy novel... Hahahaha

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 2

    Ok cool this clears a few things up. I think i have a general idea of how these heroes work. an example would be One Punch man with the classes ...

    Aug 1, 2020


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