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Hello again. Ah interesting new chapter however i'm a little confused about a few things. But i'm sure it will be explained later. Glitch couldn't make any sense with what ...

Hello Andrewknorpp! And a late welcome to YWS! What a great story! You say you've never written a romance but this really good. not only that but from the perspective ...

Hello Vilnius Ah so now we get some NATO perspective, excellent. i think its good seeing a nuked America from other countries perspective, and all the global politics involved, the ...

Hello Vilnius Alright I don't have to much to add review wise but here we go: Like @RadDog13579 said If you not adding new characters then the new characters section ...

Hello comrade! Okay i just read the prologue and then read this. I have to say i'm very interested in the post apocalyptic genre, so i'm very excited to see ...

Once again long, but very good. an excellent continuation on your story. gave a lot of insight on the world of oasis, i'm getting some SAO vibes. its very interesting ...

Sorry for the late review! Damn this long, but very good. its a very interesting plot, the world peace, the two AI fighting over the same guy and the SAO ...

Welcome to YWS! its good to have you here. Alright lets get started. so far it seems like a very interesting story, it captivated me well enough. your plot is ...

Hello comrade I shall review this now: Also welcome to YWS! This has a lot of potential to be very interesting novel, there are many paths you could go with ...

Hello comrade Stormblessed24! I apologise in advance as i am a pretty crap reviewer, i'm mostly going to be giving my opinion. Okayy where to start, this goes for both ...

Hello comrade Draculus! I just binge read all the chapters and damn, good stuff. I am a pretty shite reviewer but i was reading this and saw it was still ...

Hello comrade xenon Okay this a great first chapter i'm very interested in seeing where it leads. your writing gets progressively better as i read, i'm sorry to say i'm ...

A very quick Review for you. I just read the other two chapters and I must say i'm very thoroughly impressed. Your writing just rolls off the tongue. I really ...

A review for you! Hey there DrinkingTea, this is an interesting concept, i'm assuming its about a cowboy coming into the modern world. i apologise if i'm wrong. Anyhow, onto ...

Review for you! This is relatable. I saw this in the green room, so i thought why not. I am not gonna lie, poetry is not really my forte. I ...