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Maybe in between "Perhaps it'll stay", you can put "Just for another day." When it comes to "Even Megan," you should change that to "Even Megan got bored, and just ...

It's really good; just make sure to capitalize all of the beginning lines so it all looks the same. I really like the rhyming theme it’s really good. Keep up ...

This was really good, I think if people who are considering suiside read this they would change there mind. I would have liked to know what the boy im guessing ...

This reminds me of a really cool historic nusery rhyme! Like something little kids would make up about the British comming. Nothing really bothered me in this, I could not ...

Hey really good story its just you need to watch your grammar. Like when you said "already die?" it needs to be already dead. Also this is just a question ...

Holly crap that was really good, I could not find anything wrong with it. I really love the Cul-de-sac haha it make me laugh so hard and I really don't ...

This story is sad but what makes it really sad is that it happens to girls around the country everyday. I think you sould continue the story, I would really ...

It was a really good story, the ending kinda confused me a bit. You need to watch your gammar just a bit, and also make sure to describe the little ...

That was really good, but just watch out for words that really don't need to be in your writing. At the end you should have put how Juliet ended up ...

Hey that was a really great story, but you need to improve your grammer alittle more. Also make sure to really descride what they look like and there surrounding like ...