briggsy1996

Thanks! Sarina didn't die, fortunately (this is a very true story) but it's really interesting that you interpreted it that way! Maybe I should specify that%u2026 again, thanks :)

Hey, you have some really effective imagery going on here. I enjoyed this poem because it has a thread to string it along (past, present, future…) and you established your ...

This is brilliant! Amazing imagery… the final sonnet is so descriptive, and the final line leaves me so satisfied. Awesome writing, seriously! -Briggsy

Brilliant!

I like this. Especially, "when you collect scars like kids collect pennies but you don’t get candy for them just dirty looks". Really to the point but also powerful and ...

Thank you both very much for the reviews... I'm glad you pointed out my first person/third person issue- I usually don't have that problem but I started out writing this ...

Hi there, Wow, this was so touching! It was so well written and it flowed nicely. I loved it so much! Thanks for the read and happy writing :) -Briggsy

Hi there! This is more of a comment than a review: I just thought is it cute and wanted to say nice work! Keep Writing, -Briggsy :)

Thank you both very much for your input~ I know the title says revised, but it really is still a work in progress; for whatever reason, I have always have ...

Hey, I enjoyed the poem a lot, however the title confused me just a little... just a thought :) -Briggsy

I rather enjoyed this! I especially liked the ending :)

Oh my goodness, that was good! So excellently written and gripping... I really enjoyed this! No nitpicks- I noticed a few spelling errors but nothing major. Looking forward to reading ...

Hey, No Nitpicks, I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this and I'm definitely keeping tabs on this story! Best wishes with your writing! :) -Briggsy

Hey, Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your poem! Nice work :)